The surest way to fuzzy thinking.
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How best to baffle a reader.
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When you really want to be unclear.
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What's an antecedant, anyway?
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I like to have my reader working
in reverse! [ ]
These two guys,
this & which, are often used as
relative pronouns. They're
in the family with who:
who is
for persons, which is for things, so is that . . .
. . . you remember that?
This can get in there, too, as can it, though
these are not relative pronouns but something called
expletives. Forget that. Think
of this as being problematic
right along side which,
when used too loosely.
Bob disliked Amy, who
was his sister's nemesis. This
puzzled us.
A nemesis, usually used in the plural nemeses, is a word that
we've taken from Green mythology: Nemesis, the goddess of getting even,
revenge.
Mythology, which is a subject I deeply love, is not a great collection
in the sky of untruths. That's a limited notion, one that will blind
us to the importance of myths, the very stories we live by.
So those three underlined usages are
relative pronouns: who,
that, which
and the purple This
is an expletive like It,
used here to refer back to...to what? To the fact that Bob disliked
Amy, or to the fact that Amy was Bob's sister's come-upppance? You can't
tell and therein lies the problem.
But hold on This,
and let's (let
+ us => let
' s ) look at the pronouns:
They are called "relative" because they relate
back to an antecedent.
An "antecedent" means comes before, and whatever it is that comes
before will be either a noun or a pronoun:
Amy -- who word -- that
mythology -- which one -- that
[Proper noun]
[common noun]
[another noun]
[pronoun]
This is why people
will pack your mind with cotton, when they use a relative pronoun to refer
back not to a noun or a pronoun, but to something much more complicated,
which is why it becomes vague, unclear, which
is not what you want. This would be bad writing.
You can see what happens. If you use the relative
pronoun to refer back to a whole idea, instead of to a clear antecedent
expressed as a noun or pronoun, then you don't know what part of the idea
you're refering to and the whole thing becomes vague, blurry. You can feel
your mind's eye go crossed. Antidote for cross-eyed minds:
Which
and this must refer to clear antecedents.
I guess a "rule" would be:
Which should always have a clear antecedent expressed as a noun
or a pronoun.
And for this: For
clarity, always try to have this refer to a noun or a pronoun.
Sometimes you can get away with
a vague this if the context is clear:
Enkidu
and Gilgamesh do battle with a giant that is a cannibal and is ultimately
defeated by being blinded. This should remind you of the
one-eyed giant that Odysseus battles in The Oddyssy.
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